I
think the man looked like alone. He needed a love, a hug from somebody at the
place he stood at that time. The man with shoulder length hair was looking for
a man or men who wanted to hug him sincerely. The big spirit that could build
an inspiration and built a humanity which came together in that time should be
imitated. He struggled to get what he wanted. At the first time, no one cared
to the man and they just stared at him. Also they just passed around him
without any attention. Might be all people thought that there was something
wrong on that man. With his open arms to hug everyone surrounded him, he got
nothing because no one cared. He got just a smile. After ten minutes later, an
old-woman gave him a hug as the first hug which was very sincere. Then another
girl also gave a hug to him and to be continued by all people in that place. The
free hugs began to happen when an old woman hugged that man as the first hug
that he got. And then a lady also hugged him. After that, all people came and
hugged him. In few minutes later, all people hugged each other. Expressed their
love, their feeling to everyone. They just liked friend immediately by the spirit
of the man. At the first time, that kind of activity didn’t get any attention by
the police and it was banned by the police and the officials. No police wanted
to give their hug but intended to stop it. After the police tried to stop the
campaign, all people made a petition with the police and found signatures for
that. In the end of the campaign after 10,000 signatures were reached, they got
a permit and the police also gave their hug. The main point of this video is
that we have to be brave to get what we want. He struggled until he got what he
wanted. No matter whether there was trouble or not. It was what the man did in
this video. He didn’t give up even though no one cared to him at the first time,
but he still tried and tried until the old woman hugged him as the first hug
that begin the “Free Hugs”. Finally he
got many hugs from everyone there and also got the permit from the police. The
thing that we get from this video is the spirit of the man to build humanity which
came together in what could only be described as awe inspiring.
I don't really understand about this sentence "In the end of the campaign after 10,000 signatures were reached". I think It should be "at the end of the campaign after 10,000 signatures were reached" or you can use first sentence and omit the "of". Overall, your writing is good :)
BalasHapusthanks you very much Yeyen..
BalasHapus