Topic sentence : Clean the messy room by following
these steps
Topic : Clean the messy
room
Controlling idea : Following these steps
Supporting idea :
After
having a party, of course your room must be messy. So you have to clean your
messy room by following these steps. First, you have to tidy up all the
things. You can edge the prices things like sofa, table lamp, table, chair,
shock, shoes, telephone, carpet and the sweater in the corner of the room. Second,
place the clock and the painting in a good/right place in other they looked
nice and interesting. After everything is teddy, take your sweep and clear the
floor from dust and rubbishes. After that, set your carpet on the floor.
Next, you have to decorate your room like the sofa, table, and the chair
in the appropriate place or in the middle of the room. And then put the
telephone on the table and also the table lamp. Sixth, it will be better
if you put the books in the shelf between the clock and the painting. To make
the room looked so neat, put the shock and the sweater in your wardrobe or
closet. Finally, put the shoes behind your wardrobe and never put it on
the books.
good writing, i can't fin any mistake through read it
BalasHapusthanks
BalasHapusHmmm, i think it's better to arrange the sentences again
BalasHapusand please write more